Please click the link below for my third elevator pitch:
On the last post, I received great feedback to look a little more professional, so I tried to! I also tried to improve my hand positions and voice tone while I speak.
I believe that I became much more confident in front of the camera especially since I basically memorized the pitch. Looking at my past videos I uploaded helped me memorize it even more! If I ever give an elevator pitch, I’m pretty sure I will record it first and listen to it so I can memorize it faster.
Hi Ariel,
ReplyDeleteGreat job on your pitch! As an audience member I was engaged the entire time and I didn't get bored. I also liked how your pitch provided a lot of information about your opportunity. It is important to convince your audience why they should consider giving your product a shot and they way you pitch it to them makes a big difference. Your confidence throughout your pitch really made your opportunity stand out.
Hey Ariel,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your pitch! You came off as confident and informational while explaining your vegan dating app. I liked that you gave a statistic of the vegan / vegetarian population in the United States and listed off other specific dating apps. You really emphasized the values and lifestyle of a vegan and it shows that you truly know what you're talking about!
Also, "Vegan Zone" I like the name!
Hi Ariel,
ReplyDeleteI thought it was a great presentation! It was interesting, intriguing, smooth and on-point. And you didn't forget to smile, which made me feel welcomed. Yes, you are right too, it's about time we have vegan dating site! What an exciting business idea. I met my husband through specific online dating site, so I understand there are potential customers out there looking for their special someone who shares similar values as theirs. Keep up the good work, you nailed the pitch.