Click the link to my second VeganZone Elevator Pitch:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xbI2mUSyA5o&feature=youtu.be
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xbI2mUSyA5o&feature=youtu.be
- I changed my elevator pitch a good deal to be more creative, persuasive, and engaging. I changed the introduction, many of my points, and kept some of the same things in the last pitch. The only feedback I got in the last video was to make gestures with both hands in a more visual manner, so I tried to incorporate that in this video. I also included the app being free, easy to use, and emphasized on making it as safe of an environment as possible. I received the feedback of the app having to be free to attract customers, but it will include ads and “upgrades.” This came from figuring out buyer behavior.
Hi Ariel,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed watching your pitch video as well! You were very confident and impeccable. From beginning to the end, it was smoothly ran. I also liked that you started your pitch by asking questions. I didn't and I wish I have done that as well, because I think it grabs the audiences' attention and it makes your pitch intriguing in the beginning, people are more likely to pay attention to the rest of the pitch. The only thing I like to advise for the next time is that if you were to wear a blazer or some sort of presentable business outfit, I think the audience would appreciate that.
You did a great job, I enjoyed your pitch for this post. You looked very confident and sure about the information you've given. I like that you used your hands point out the really important things you wanted the audience to know. The idea of the app is coming along great and I look forward to future improvement to it.
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